The script behind the demo is fair fan writing for 107 words: the Hero of Time, Princess Zelda, Navi, the Master Sword, Ganon and the Triforce, all from Ocarina of Time and used correctly. Read over 44.7 seconds, it moves at about 2.4 words a second, which leaves room for each image to land.
The images are where it falls apart. Despite this page's Retro Pixel Art label, the frames are rich, painterly illustrations, not pixels. Worse, the hero first appears as a caped figure in a blue suit that anyone would call Superman, and later as a bearded warrior in armor. Zelda shows up as a woman with fairy wings. Nothing on screen says Hyrule.
That is the most useful lesson here. Scenes follow descriptions, and a name like "Link" gives the image model little to hold onto. Put the green tunic, the pointed cap, the long ears and the shield with the bird crest into your sentences, then check every frame in the editor before you post.
The last line, asking what draws viewers to Hyrule, is a reasonable comment prompt. Asking for one thing, such as their first Zelda game, would get more answers, because it is easier to reply to.
